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Despair
Sept 24, 2007 8:42:05 GMT -5
Post by Gray Heart on Sept 24, 2007 8:42:05 GMT -5
It's pain and suffering That begins anew It's happend again I thought i was through Life's done it again It's happend once more Happyness has left me life's just a bore It happend long ago When i felt oh so free I left all alone ina pit of despair as a friend dropped by they helped me out i got on my feet they were unsturdy with doubt as i stood up and my ballance regained i got nudged to the side and lost my footing again so now here i sit in the bottom of this pit this pit called despair i no longer see joy i no longer see life for my life was sucked dry and ive no care to retrieve it this pit has been coverd and boarded up well so no longer can i be seen in this solitary hell.
That poem shall be my last one ever posted. For i have come to the realisation after all these years they are my life. My poems are a culmination of my feelings that i cant seem to show and therefor are not for ppl to know. They are only a referance for me to let loose my feelings so the proverbial bottle doesnt open again, So i thank you all who hafe read them and commented this is my last piece so enjoy it well. Farewell and adieux
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Despair
Feb 20, 2008 3:29:34 GMT -5
Post by shashmara on Feb 20, 2008 3:29:34 GMT -5
I REALLY liked this one, it spoke perfectly to what I have just gone through. I am surprised and sad that no-one has commented on Gray Hearts poem.
I have put a few that I like to call my "mind farts" in the bit named "rummage's rantings" ...or something like that...damn this non-brain!
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Despair
Apr 7, 2008 22:25:09 GMT -5
Post by Gray Heart on Apr 7, 2008 22:25:09 GMT -5
I thank you for the reply shashmara to some degree it brightened my day that people are actually reading them and enjoying them to some degree. so again thank you.
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